a haiku, aside from the syllable strucutre, captures a fleeting moment that tends to focus on simple, sensory imagery. haiku evoke sudden insight or emotion, and they frequently juxtpose two images with a cutting word. here are my gatherings:
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your skin will shatter
to bits, and within my bones,
grows desperate love
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encase your gazing,
i only want you to think
that i'm fantastic
*
children frolick in
mud and dirt and dismay--
alone in song, together interrupeted
*
sun hides--
blanketed by the moon
and casting their hue
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toes stretch out straight
but stop just short of the wall
yawns of feet tired of shoes
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born of pain she clawed
her gentle way in this life,
this long-winded race
*
bitter hunger and
its satiability
thirst easily quenched
*
not comfortable
though--hard earned and scraping by
fight the good ol' fight!
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eagerness, without
grace, free me from confinement
destined to desire